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Nobody Wants the Good Neighbor Prize

Every finalist withdraws from a town's beloved Good Neighbor award after receiving a blank card. The florist making the winner's bouquet and a retired registrar investigate why an honor worth almost nothing has frightened people who are usually delighted to be praised.

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The bouquet for the Good Neighbor Prize contained no lilies, no roses and, by ten o'clock, no recipient.

Dorothy Gray put down the telephone. It was the third withdrawal since breakfast.

She had arranged the flowers in a cheerful yellow jug donated by the ironmonger, who expected the jug back before five. Civic generosity worked best when everyone kept track of the crockery.

Across the counter, Peter Shaw examined the award certificate through his reading glasses.

'Perhaps they're modest.'

'All five?'

'It's a modest town.'

Dorothy looked through the window at a banner congratulating the mayor on obtaining a new banner.

Peter folded his glasses. 'What did the last one say?'

'That she was deeply honored and unfortunately unavailable for the foreseeable future.'

'Illness?'

'She was buying compost twenty minutes ago.'

The bell over the shop door rang. A woman entered carrying the nomination envelope Dorothy had delivered the previous afternoon. She placed it on the counter as carefully as if it contained a wasp.

'Please take my name off the list.'

Dorothy offered sympathy, a chair and, because the woman was shaking, a glass of water. Peter quietly moved the certificate aside.

A blank white card slipped from the envelope.

'Is this part of the award?' the woman asked.

Dorothy had ordered the cards herself. They were cream, printed with a small gold tree. This one was white and entirely empty.

Peter did not touch it.

'What does it mean?' he asked.

The woman looked from him to Dorothy. Whatever she had expected, a genuine question was not it.

'You don't know?'

Outside, a volunteer fastened another congratulatory ribbon to the bandstand. Dorothy glanced at her unsent bouquet and realized that nobody in town had asked the nominees whether being called good was a prize they could afford to accept.

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Plant the blank card's paper, delivery route and timing early enough for a fair solution. The nominees need distinct reasons for fear rather than one identical guilty secret. Keep the card sender accountable for foreseeable distress even if the motive is understandable. Dorothy's flower business gives her practical access without making every customer confess, while Peter's experience clarifies procedure rather than granting him official investigative authority.

Dorothy loses every award recipient after blank cards arrive.
Peter checks the nomination process and identifies who handled the envelopes.
The nominees deny a shared connection while making identical excuses.
A paper watermark links the cards to a former community project.
Dorothy discovers the nominees benefited differently from an overlooked volunteer's work.
A public accusation threatens to blame the wrong stationery supplier.
Peter separates a private request for acknowledgment from an unrelated financial irregularity.
The card sender explains the intended invitation to speak, not a threat.
The financial deception is documented through invoices and corrected publicly.
The prize becomes an opt-in recognition with clear criteria and shared credit.

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